Revision: After
January 17, 2008
Revision: Before
January 17, 2008
The essay that I chose to revise was my “American Romanticism” essay. It was actually rather good, considering the time constraints present when I was writing it. Looking back, I feel that the main points that I need to concentrate on are word choice (including repetition) and expression: oftentimes, my ideas and statements are muddled due to deadwood. Apparently, even when pressed for time, I tend to be rather verbose.
The pictures of the “before” essay are rather blurry, but I’m afraid that I don’t have a scanner available. Fortunately, the final copy does not really differ too much from the original, at least in content.
